I once did this shitty ending draft for Homestuck where John gets appreciated by the crew and is sent back home (also includes the "pose as a team" thing people didn't see in the comic) and showed it to a group of readers on an April 13th thread. They all reacted with disappointment because of how sappy, generic, and rushed the ending felt, and I was sort of aware over the corny mess afterwards. I don't really wanna go back to where I've posted that to show it to you, 'cause I might be pretty embarrassed.

What makes it stick out more is the fact that I never read Homestuck, nor anything else of MS Paint Adventures, and I dislike the comic too because it's potentially horrible, yet I'm still being interested in it every day. I'm stuck in between decisions of wether I wanna subject myself to an over 9000 page long postmodern mess or not.

What I kind of found out about Homestuck's last pages/ending (which I haven't seen and people know it's bad) is that the team of humans split themselves up (which probably wouldn't work), the battle between English(?) was set in an anticlimax, the final battle wasn't even good (read about how shitty it looked), and, obviously, they never posed as a team, which I really would've wanted. There's also other things I might've been corrected about (but not quite), particularly how the original Earth was probably destroyed and Earth C was made later on.

This proves that I may not be a good writer, and I have to improve. Maybe I should've just discarded that ending draft and replaced it with something like "John get iPad" or something like that just to play along, but I thought before that this ending was SRS BZNS.

Just follow tips to improve and maybe you'll see what the effect of your writing could create...

WHY AM I STILL MENTIONING HOMESTUCK? IS ANYBODY CARING? I HATE TO SEEK FOR ATTENTION, BUT HELLO?